User:Kaleighbrennan/Early childhood trauma/Seaturtle524 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

kaleighbrennan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaleighbrennan/Early_childhood_trauma?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Early childhood trauma

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content in this article is very informational and organized well. The reference article "How Early Childhood Trauma is Unique" contains a great amount of supportive information. By also using the content from the wiki article, helps to make sure the information is correct and up to date. That was done very well. A neutral approach was taken with this article giving it a non-biased point of view. The new amnesia section that was added in contains quality information. There will need to be a reference article to support the information added. Overall, one of the strengths in this article is the writing.

https://ajp.psychiatryonline.org/doi/10.1176/ajp.156.5.749?url_ver=Z39.88-2003&rfr_id=ori:rid:crossref.org&rfr_dat=cr_pub%20%200pubmed