User:Kaljumaegi/Newton Slave Burial Ground/Seattleair Peer Review

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Kaljumaegi


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 * Editing User:Kaljumaegi/Newton Slave Burial Ground - Wikipedia
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Oh wow...very nice work creating your own article! It is very well-sourced and nicely written. This article has a really nice flow throughout and doesn't feel at any point jostling or random. I was really intrigued by your article and would've liked a few more details in the first paragraph on the Article Body. I think maybe those two sections could have their own headers as they both give good material to their respective topics. I think to really tie together the topic of the Newton Slave Burial Ground, I would like to see another paragraph (or even mention) of the discovery of this site (as you give good details about the before life and what we have learned from the remains). Could mention something about discovery, excavation, etc. of this site would tie everything together. Also, maybe could add in a photo of the old plantation, or the excavation site, or a location map of where this site is located (just a thought). That's about all I can think of though...nice job!