User:Kallibeckstrom/Kendall Cotton Bronk/Kensey Smith Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Kallibeckstrom/ Kendall Cotton Bronk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kallibeckstrom/Kendall_Cotton_Bronk?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/a
 * N/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I didn't notice that you had a Lead sentence, but rather jumped right into the content of the article, which is helpful for the reader to have a summarized sentence of what he/she will be reading. The content you added appeared relevant to the topic. I liked how you split up your headings and the contributions of Bronk. At the end, don't forget to include your references that your information is cited for credibility. Adding an image or images can be helpful in enhancing the content of the article for readers. Your tone throughout remained neutral and unbiased.