User:Kallibeckstrom/Kendall Cotton Bronk/RachelA22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kallibeckstrom


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kallibeckstrom/Kendall_Cotton_Bronk?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I thought your article was great overall! I'd make sure to add in-text citations and your references. I would also add pictures if you can find any. I struggled to find your lead sentence, so it could be helpful to add that if you haven't already. It could also be helpful to add the dates that she studied at Claremont Graduate University. I did not notice any biases in your writing, and your article seemed very concise.