User:KamanaMS/Manodharma/SterlingAC Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KamanaMS


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KamanaMS/Manodharma?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manodharma

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * I think the current lead is a great summary that encompasses the major key points of the article. I get a brief understanding of what Manodharma is.

Content


 * The additional information that is added I think is great. For the five improvisational forms, I would bullet those or something so it's clean and easy to read.
 * For "Types of Manodharma" and "Cultivating Manodharma," I would break those out into their own heading section within the article.
 * The information under "Cultivating Manodharma" is in need of references. I noticed only one reference being cited.
 * Making a note to add information on Pallayi but I know that it's on your radar.

Sources and References


 * All of the references listed are reliable sources, however, your article would benefit greatly with a few additional sources.
 * Be sure to delete the repetitive sources that are listed. May have been a formmating issue when copying over from the live article.