User:Kambeau/Calliope St./MHD2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kambeau


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kambeau/Calliope St.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead looks very good! It is concise in its description of the street and gives enough information about the street. The article is neutral when presenting its facts. I think that if possible, another section about any features or attractions located on the street could be included in the article. In the decline section, the sentences do not really explain how the street has declined. They seem to just describe the diversity on the street. Still, the article is very organized and easy to read. It does a good job at describing the street. The photo fits the article and adheres to Wikipedia's rules. One of the sources is repeated three times in the reference. You can remove the repetition and use the same number when citing that source in your article. I think the end of your last sentence in the history section might be missing a citation as well. Overall, I think you did a great job at drafting your article!