User:Kamila Pineiro/Black is beautiful/GMT2020UPRC Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * I`m gonna be reviewing the work of the user: Kamila Pineiro
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Kamila Pineiro/Black is beautiful

Lead evaluation

 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?

The article doesn´t have an introductory sentence. It doesn´t explain what the article is about in a topic sentence. It just says "black is beautiful" and then it goes with another topic that women with black skin are beautiful.


 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

The article has information that is true, but the very first sentence, wich is the lead and topic sentence almost sounds like an opinion. People may not think that black is a beautiful color, wich it is a bit hard to understand at the begining, but as you keep reading it it makes a little sense of why that is the lead.

Tone and Balance evaluation

 * Is the content added neutral?

The content is addd ina neutral way, wich is easy to understand.


 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

As I said before, people may not think black is a beautiful color. So I think it is trying to attempt to persuade the reader in favor of the article.

Sources and References evaluation

 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?

The article is not backed up with sources that I could look at at the end of the article.

Organization evaluation

 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?

It is clear, but it could use some work.


 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?

As I checked the article, it had many errors that could use some work. I founded 10 errors.

Images and Media evaluation

 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?

It doesn´t include, but it could be beautiful to see pictures of black people or the things that you are talking about in the article.

Overall evaluation

 * What are the strengths of the content added?

It has a little bit of plagarism. you still have time to work on it. I believe in you!