User:Kamrynkinsey/Air pollution in Hong Kong/Kaoalyson Peer Review

General info
Kamryn Kinsey
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing User:Kamrynkinsey/Air pollution in Hong Kong
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Air pollution in Hong Kong
 * Air pollution in Hong Kong

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated or altered.

The content that has been updated is under the article subsection "Effects" and under its subheading "Health Implications." The content added is well written and makes sense with the existing content. Just a reminder to add citations for the quotes.

The additional edits for "-Implement initiatives or policies implemented by the Hong Kong government or other relevant organizations to address air pollution and mitigate its health effects" can be moved to the subsection "Actions Implemented" or "Actions Discussed"