User:Kanderson13/Abala Bose/Kirstenb2 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Kanderson13
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Abala Bose

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? No, there could've been a stronger lead about how she was into feminism.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Sort of
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yeah
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Very concise

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? not really
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? the whole feminism viewpoint could've been expounded upon a little bit more
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?no

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes
 * Are the sources current? yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work? i checked 2 and they worked

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? easy to read, but could've been more in detail
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? not that i could tell
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? secction "later life" should be a heading not just bolded

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? just pictures of her face
 * Are images well-captioned? yes
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? yes
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?yes

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? not very long,
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? it looks like it was made pretty nicely aside from minor mistakes
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? yes

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Really good (especially since I think she made it herself) just teeny tiny mistakes that aren't hard to fix
 * What are the strengths of the content added? New info
 * How can the content added be improved? More in depth