User:Kaner04/COVID-19 pandemic in Japan/Apple1421 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kaner04


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaner04/COVID-19_pandemic_in_Japan?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * COVID-19 pandemic in Japan

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a good start to your article! Though, I would maybe provide an overview of the covid-19 pandemic in Japan in your lead before I you start discussing the government and task force. Or if this is an addition and the general topic of the pandemic is already discussed in the original article, you may want to put this under a subheading. Your draft ends a bit quickly, it seems unfinished. Are you planning on writing more? or is this all? If this is it I would maybe add a sentence that sums up the topics discussed more broadly. This would help the reader understand your addition to the article more. There is also only one source, which is not good. You need three sources, so I would go find two others.