User:Kaner04/COVID-19 pandemic in Japan/Eillima Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kaner04(Covid-19 pandemic in Japan)

 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaner04/COVID-19_pandemic_in_Japan?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * COVID-19 pandemic in Japan

Evaluate the drafted changes
==== -When it comes to your sources, adding more sources outside of Wikipedia would be helpful. If I remember correctly, I think you needed 3 sources outside of Wikipedia. I think finding a source about the Novel Coronavirus Response Headquarter would be a great source to find. ==== -Mentioning the 36 high ranking members might also be useful to add in

-Your link to the Deputy Chief Cabinet Secretary for Crisis Management is lead to any page. This also goes the same for Okita Yoshiki. Maybe looking up online might find something

-Shinzo Abe is random at the end of the paragraph. I think adding the reference link at the start where you said, " On 30 January 2020, Abe announced" and putting the reference link at Abe's name there would make more sense.

-Overall, I think that there is no bias in your article. Everything is clear to read. I thinking fixing minor details and looking up other sources is all that is needed.