User:Kaner04/COVID-19 pandemic in Japan/Omgmylife Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Username : Kaner04 Paragraph of the original article


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaner04/COVID-19_pandemic_in_Japan?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * COVID-19 pandemic in Japan
 * COVID-19 pandemic in Japan

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In Bibliography, the reference link should bring you to the original article not the library page. The citation of source#1 and source#2 is wrong probably because the published date (eliminated the month).

The content added to the article is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. However, the explanation of why the establishment of "Novel Coronavirus Response Headquarters" is important is not clear.

The drafting should include at least three references but there's only one. And the only reference is not relevant to the drafting information.