User:Kangaboo/Homelessness in the San Francisco Bay Area/Nicole Lizbeth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kangaboo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kangaboo/Homelessness_in_the_San_Francisco_Bay_Area?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homelessness in the San Francisco Bay Area

Evaluate the drafted changes
Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article?

The pieces added to the article flow smoothly and align well with the already existing content of that section. In addition, the examples provided strengthen the article and demonstrate the impacts of outreach groups, anti-housing ordinances, and the existing concern for people's park residents.

'''What are the strengths of the added content? How can it be improved?'''

I think the contributions do what they need and do require much improvement. However, they are concise, neutral, and flow nicely. It would be great to talk about the criminalization of survival under anti-homeless ordinances. This created a lot of negative sentiments around the topic and contributed to this notion of homelessness being a people's problem. As for outreach, you can always add other groups just so that it does not seem bias toward your org, but because of the neutral tone, I don't think it's an issue, just a suggestion. :)

Is the content well organized?

The content is well organized and has citations where needed. All of the sources are displayed in the reference list and seem to be relevant to the article's topic.

Are there any claims that appear heavily biased?

There are no biased claims made. Again, it reads as neutral and informative.