User:Kannbrown2/Darryl B. Hood/Roshawndrathomas Peer Review

General info
Kannbrown2, KaitlynDaniel, HunterH uab, and Mirandafast
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Kannbrown2/Darryl B. Hood
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Darryl B. Hood

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead on the article is good, but I would add maybe a little more on the research he is/has conducted. I know there is already a sentence or two on his research, but I think it would be beneficial to add a little more detail (not too much) on other research. Also, a picture would be great too!

Content: I like that yall are adding a community-driven health research and community engagement experience section. Y'all are going in the right direction, but I believe a section maybe on his childhood or life before college will be beneficial (maybe something in his childhood inspired him to become a professor). In the teaching/experiences section, at the end it is just stated that he continues his work at OSU, but I would elaborate more on what work, and if he does research at OSU. The neurotoxicology section, environmental, and behavioral sections are good, I actually like that they are there. It gives insight into his research a little more. The current research section is smart because its giving up to date information on what he is up to now. I just don't see any new references in the reference section.

Tone: The tone of this article is neutral. It is very informative with no biases and or opinions on him. There is no persuasion either it is just purely informational.

Sources and references: As I stated before, I don't see any new sources or references in the section, so I would try and find some to add.

Images and Media: There aren't any photos of him, so I would add some. I would say it would be cool if yall could find some pictures of his research, but I'm not sure if thats possible.

Overall: Yall are heading in the right direction. The edits made and sections added are good and precise. I would just add as much information that I could on him maybe even reach out to him (if you can) to see if he can help with some insight into his life.