User:Kaoalyson/Seafood Watch/Kamrynkinsey Peer Review

General info
Alyson Kao
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaoalyson/Seafood_Watch?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Seafood Watch

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not yet been updated.

The content added appears relevant to the topic of sustainable seafood and provides valuable information about Seafood Watch, its initiatives, and its impact on promoting sustainable seafood options. Overall, the tone of the article is neutral, presenting information in a factual manner.

The article mentions Seafood Watch and the Monterey Bay Aquarium as primary sources of information, but it could benefit from including more references or citations to support the claims. Also, the author could eventually add some images to enhance the article.