User:Kapena8/Dotted Periwinkle/Lhart808 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kapena8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kapena8/Dotted Periwinkle
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Based on a recent peer edit I completed, many suggestions revolved around sounding confident in your skills as a writer and scientist. Constructing strongly unbiased and intriguing excerpts for this draft is crucial for the future of your final wiki page. To begin the draft, I recommend gathering information about the Dotted Periwinkle into a sort of list for organizational purposes. After completing that step, pick apart the most viable facts and write well-informed sentences that expand on the topic. The writing should be clear and concise as you continue adding descriptions and taxonomic ranks such as the genus. One major tip: Be sure to italicize the scientific name of your mollusk every time.

For the bibliography, making sure you scour the internet is important because the information is easily missed. I recommend using Google Scholar to find academic sources. This method searches the web for journals, published works, and scholarly essays.

Things to add:

Photo/s of subject

Taxonomic Ranks

In-text citations

Please feel free to take my suggestions and experiences into consideration when beginning your draft. Hopefully, it will lead you to feel more comfortable when completing the final article. Good luck!

-Lola Hart

Aloha Lola,

Thank you really great suggestions and resources for me to use, definitely will be taking all this into consideration!