User:Kara0719/Museum education/Nmoore23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kara0719


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * N/A


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Museum education

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good lead sentence which describes the topic.

Lead doesn't really give brief description of article's major sections.

Lead is concise.

Don't think article deals with Wikipedia's equity gap.

Beginning of Art Museums section could use some work or be removed, especially the "very new institutions" line.

All of the citation links appear to work.

Article already seems neutral.

Article could use some images as there is only one.

My biggest advice for this article is to focus on the Beginning of Art Museums section as that one is really lacking compared to the rest of the article.