User:Kara0719/Museum education/Sctbr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kara0719


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kara0719/Museum_education?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Museum education
 * Museum education

Evaluate the drafted changes
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 * I appreciate what you imply about the limitations of the article as it currently stands, discussing mainly art museums when there are so many other museums with even more explicitly educational missions, like history and science museums.
 * I would be interested to see you explore more sources respecting museum education in other kinds of museums, as you mentioned you had. Could these sources be integrated into the theory in practice section? This section is the most like a stub in the original article so it seems like a good place to expand.
 * Do you think that all the subsections in the "History" section should be classed under history? Even your current outline could suggest otherwise. I'd be interested to see you work further with the overall organization of that section of the article.
 * Would it be helpful to organize the article more with subheadings for different kinds of museums or would that not work with the structure as it is?
 * I will take your breakdown of the structure into consideration as I edit my article. Perhaps some restructuring may be in order there too.