User:Karaganr1/Montipora grisea/Annsli.Hilton Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Karaganr1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Karaganr1/Montipora grisea


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Montipora grisea

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- In the first sentence specify who they is.

- In your article you leave out a lot of important information available in the original article. Find a way to expand further on the original article without losing all of its information.

- Add a picture

- your article includes a lot of cool facts about the corals but it is scattered, including more information about each talking point could be beneficial to the flow of the article. Annsli.Hilton (talk) 22:38, 18 October 2021 (UTC)Annsli.Hilton