User:Karcherrk/Roosevelt Gabbros/Vosikajm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Karcherrk) Roosevelt Gabbro


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Karcherrk/Roosevelt Gabbros


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead

 * The introduction is great. It is clear, concise, and not too wordy.
 * The introduction does introduce some of the main topics and characteristics

Content

 * Yes, all of the content is relevant to the topic and supports the main ideas.
 * Yes, content is up to date.
 * The only suggestion I would have here is to include a self-made image through photoshop or illustrator.
 * Has lots of petrology information and background (which is great!)

Tone and Balance

 * The tone of this article is very neutral.
 * No sense of persuasion. All very informative.

Sources and References

 * All of the sources are relevant.
 * All of the sources are up to date.
 * The sources accurately reflect the information in the article.
 * All of the links work.
 * Needs more than four sources.

Organization

 * I think the organization is perfect. Starts with intro then to general info then ends with specific information about each end group along with petrology.
 * The images are in order.

Media

 * The images are a good size where it is easily read and fits the page.
 * Images have good captions that are short and concise.
 * The images are laid out in order of information.
 * Only suggestion is to have own edited image on the page.

New Article Things

 * It does meet Wikipedia's notability requirement (Has more than 2-3 reliable sources but barley).
 * The list of sources is very short. It should have way more, especially for how long the Wikipedia page is.
 * The sources that are there are very good and relevant.
 * It does not link other articles to make it more discoverable.

Overall Impressions

 * This is a very well thought out wiki page.
 * It does need way more sources to back your information. Four sources is just not enough for how long the article is.
 * I think a self made image would also help if possible. Something like a geologic map.
 * Also I think a map of where exactly the Roosevelt Gabbro's are in Oklahoma. People not from the area have no clue which part of Oklahoma that is in.
 * If possible, I think a stratigraphic column would help visualize the order in which the end members are in.
 * If you could add some images of each member group that also might help the article out.
 * Other than that, it is a great article with very good structure and information. Looks like a standard Wiki page (which is good!)