User:KarenM.Cook/Zones of Regulation/UOWils038 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Karen.M.Cook


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KarenM.Cook/Zones_of_Regulation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * First version, not a current published article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Karen,

Thank you for creating this article. It does a great job of outlining the Zones of Regulation in a neutral, well-written, and easy to understand manner. I could not find any grammatical or formatting errors. Your sources are current, reliable, and are used in a resourceful manner. There are a few minor changes I would suggest. Some of the terms mentioned in your article already have Wikipedia pages, I would be beneficial to link those terms back to their main pages to drive page views and give the reader an opportunity to further their knowledge in those areas if they wish to do so. Self-Regulation, Autism Spectrum Disorder, and Occupational Therapy are a few examples of pages that you can link to. Some other changes that could be considered would potentially be some media describing or portraying the practical application of the Zones of Regulation. Room for further growth also exists in the Feasibility, Generalizability and Limitations. Expanding on the limitations or further defining current use and how more research is needed to evaluate this method would be beneficial to this section. Overall, this article is a great contribution to Wikipedia!