User:Karenmegalaa/Hillshire Farm/Rgcowboys Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Karenmagelaa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Karenmegalaa/Hillshire Farm - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hillshire Farm - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that they have added is relevant to the topic and gives the readers an idea of what other products that Hillshire Farms makes in order to give them a better understanding of the company. No content added was biased or opinionated in order to sway the reader. The content is also up to date and neutral as it is giving factual information about different products made by Hillshire Farms. The content is well-organized and put into bullet points to represent all of the different products that Hillshire Farms make. The source used for this information is a reliable source because it comes from the library database, but there is no source added or used for the content added about the other products that are used and produced by Hillshire Farms. Although the source is reliable, it is not current as it was created 10 years ago.