User:Kari.Harper/Incarceration in the United States/Natalia.tosi Peer Review

General info
Kari Harper
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Kari.Harper/Incarceration in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Incarceration in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Kari,

From what you described, it seems like you have a pretty good idea of how your contribution to the article will look like. You are considering adding important elements to it, most of all with an intersectional approach. I personally really liked the evaluation of the picture and how leaving it might contribute to already established biases around black families. My only suggestion is to make sure you try to do it with the most "neutral" language possible (as they suggest us in this course), but definitely point out these extremely important topics. Finally, make sure you look for available research and data to back up your arguments on the topic of adultification. Looking forward to seeing the final version of it!

Best,

Natalia Tosi