User:Karlapadilla23!/Indigenous peoples of the Americas/Jiselle04 Peer Review

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Karlapadilla23!
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Karlapadilla23!/Indigenous peoples of the Americas
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Indigenous peoples of the Americas:

Evaluate the drafted changes
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 * It was a very interesting article that listed and went into depth about the Indigenous people. While reading this I was able to learn new things about them, that I didn't know before. It was a lot of information that listed various dates in which from your bibliography I was able to understand that you had updated certain aspects of them as they were outdated. It really showed the research that you put into in order to really know what the article is talking about and explaining. One thing you can add is more about their history and why certain things are so important to them but also how in one section within the article that focuses on the demographics of Indigenous people, to be able to go more in depth as to how they live/are treated in those certain areas that they live in. Being able to compare and connect various of the paragraphs that show the demographics of each state.