User:Karleeseek/Queer studies/Aysiagrey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kailynhill721 and Karleeseek


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Karleeseek/Queer_studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Queer studies

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the article does a good job of outlining what queer studies is and the different branches that it has. An example of this would be outlining that queer studies, LGBTQ studies and sexual diversity studies are synonyms. As I saw, I would make many changes, but I would make additions. An example of this would be adding more origin history on the development of these studies. There is a section for South Africa, China, and Brazil.. but there are probably so many more places with queer studies history and impact, in schooling. The most important thing the author could do is just adding more insight of the topic/ Always being more specific and identifying key terms will always make it easier for the reader to understand and digest. Something I like about this article that I would add to mine is the origin history in schools not in the U.S. just to see how information is being taught in other places.