User:Karleeseek/Queer studies/KennyTharp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kailynhill721, Karleeseek


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Karleeseek/Queer studies/Bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Queer studies

Evaluate the drafted changes
-Starting from the bottom, I feel as if the "Queer Studies at Non-U.S Universities" is very beneficial to your page. I think this gives you great information to start with and even more room to add to this train of thought. I am sure there are many scholarly articles regarding the Queer studies around the world.

-The "Background" section isn't useless, but the information seems to be outdated and unimportant. I think this is a massive opportunity to bulk your page and allows for so many different ideas to come to light

-The history seems light, so there's a sandbox to play in there as well. I think that this article has great framework, and an even greater chance to renovate this page into a modern marvel.

-There is a sentence that says, "Not to be confused with Queer theory". You could take the chance to attribute the two together to express and convey a different perspective on both ideals.