User:Karleeseek/Queer studies/YSL123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead just highlights the major sections of the article which is how the lead is supposed to be.

Content:

I think the content in the background section could have been added to a new section towards the end of the article that talks about how Queer studies is being talked about and implemented in todays society. Maybe the section could be called "modern representation". Just something that talks about the impact of the course today and what that does for the people who are learning about it.

Tone:

The tone is pretty cohesive.

Sources:

When I went to look at one of the sources it said that the sight can't be reached. So I'm not sure how reliable the information is from this article. It's the first source on the source list.

Organization:

The organization of the article is okay.

Images/ Media

More images could be added to the queer studies in non us universities. Maybe a map showing the universities or the places of the universities.