User:KarthikVetri/1984 anti-Sikh riots/DubiousDoubt Peer Review

General info
KarthikVetri
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KarthikVetri/1984_anti-Sikh_riots?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):1984 anti-Sikh riots

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the drafted changes are good. They have sourced their claims well, using reliable, verifiable sources. The content sources might be a little old however. Perhaps one could find more recent, up to date sources for this information.

The tone is excellent as well. The tone is mostly neutral and informative. There is a statement about 'harrowing' which is a bit emotional language, but also I think it is justified when it comes to pograms. The lead has not been updated by these changes, but we wouldn't do that until we would incorporate these changes into the main article.