User:KarthikVetri/1984 anti-Sikh riots/J2singh Peer Review

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(KarthikVetri)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:1984 anti-Sikh riots
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):1984 anti-Sikh riots

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The article is very long and repetitive, it may be helpful to go through and delete items that are repeated.

The photos that were added were good, but the second one is very blurry. Maybe find another one of the same image if possible. Also, I felt you could add images of Sikh people themselves for the audience to understand who you are talking about.