User:Kaseyharveyy/Orectolobus reticulatus/Mosipovich Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jerseygirl1999: Orectolobus reticulatus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaseyharveyy/Orectolobus_reticulatus?action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Orectolobus reticulatus

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the lead you concisely lay out the main points of the article, I only put minor word edits for better readability. Great, well-researched, well-organized and thorough anatomical and behavioral description with reputable sources. Your tone is neutral and there is no missing content. Most of my edits are grammatical/ for flow (for example eliminating "the" before the species name, "however" instead of "although", minor sentence rearrangement). Species names are typically italicized in writing. Added links to other pages when mentioned ie to wobbegongs or reticulation so someone looking up this shark could look at similar species in its group or easily access definitions for unfamiliar terms. You have extensive biological information for this species and I do not think there is anything you need to add. I would add an image of the shark to the page if images are available!