User:Kassafrass/Neurodiversity/MoFerqueron Peer Review

General info
kassafrass
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Kassafrass/Neurodiversity
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Neurodiversity

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like you have made a lot of great changes! I'm glad that you are making the article more neutral. It looks like there is a new double empathy problem illustration, so if you can, making sure it fits the theory better than the last one. From my limited understanding of the theory, it looks like it does.

The clinical additions are great! I'm looking forward to more information about the neurodevelopmental clinics in the UK. Are there any other countries that you know of doing this? If so, it might be good to add some other cultures into the mix.

I'm glad you added clinical stuff to the article because the section was severely lacking. I would like to see maybe a bit more neuroscience or discussion of the brain in your topic if you find any interesting research on it, but other than that it is looking great!