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Evaluation: Talk:Beats Electronics#EvaluationTalk:Beats Electronics#Evaluation

Article Evaluation Notes
- good lead, easy to understand, no distractions, relevant pictures, citation links work, a lot of dates, good flow and balance, neutral, many sources, and proper formatting.

Possible Articles to Work on

 * 1) Information technology consulting
 * 2) Information technology audit
 * 3) Propaganda through media
 * 4) Censorship of TikTok

Information technology consulting - review potential new sources to integrate into the article and add more information. References needed under "IT consulting skills." "Overview" section could be improved. "Consulting fees" necessary?

Propaganda through media - clean up the writing, add more sources, add more citations, and possible merge? I agree with one of the talk posts that mentions the article itself could possibly be deleted. The current information could be added to other existing articles.

Censorship of TikTok - Needs additional information under "Other Countries", new sources and citations, very short. Research if there have been any updates regarding censorship in other countries. Can anything else be added under "United States"? Maybe add "why" and effects of censorship.

Find your sources
For this project, I have decided upon improving two articles: Censorship of TikTok and Censorship on TikTok.


 * 1) What I plan on adding to Censorship of TikTok:
 * 2) * Given that some subsections have very little information on the censorship of TikTok that these countries have endured, I think it would be ideal to elaborate on.
 * 3) ** https://www.nst.com.my/world/region/2021/08/718633/bangladesh-court-orders-ban-tiktok-pubg-free-fire-save-children
 * 4) ** https://www.nytimes.com/2020/06/29/world/asia/tik-tok-banned-india-china.html
 * 5) ** https://gadgets.ndtv.com/apps/news/tiktok-ban-pakistan-lift-back-content-vulgar-obscene-complaint-2620149
 * 6) * There are other countries that have also censored the application, so I plan to research and add information about countries that are not yet included in the article.
 * 7) ** https://mincom.gov.az/en/view/news/990/azerbaijan-limits-internet-access-to-prevent-armenias-large-scale-acts-of-provocation-
 * 8) * The United States subsection seems bare by only including a hyperlink to Donald Trump–TikTok controversy. I am not sure what to add as of now, but given the sheer size of the TikTok controversy in the US, there is definitely something that is worth adding.
 * 9) * There are many grammatical and formatting errors that I plan on fixing.
 * 10) What I plan on adding to Censorship on TikTok:
 * 11) * Under the "Minority Groups" subsection, I plan on adding information to the "Black people" section about a big issue involving the censoring of "pro-black" words and phrases that TikTok content creators encountered.
 * 12) ** https://www.insider.com/a-timeline-of-allegations-that-tiktok-censored-black-creators-2021-7
 * 13) ** https://www.insider.com/tiktok-racism-algorithm-apology-creator-marketplace-ziggy-tyler-2021-7
 * 14) * I also plan on creating an "Asian people" section and discussing a scandal involving one of TikTok's newest features to the application that I remember coming across many times while scrolling through my For You Page.
 * 15) ** https://mashable.com/article/tiktok-censorship-asian-women
 * 16) * Editing the lead section so that it adequately fits with the newly added section.
 * 17) * There are a few grammatical and formatting errors that I plan on fixing.

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