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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Jackson Mac Low


 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead section of this article is informative and concise. However, the rest of the article lacks developed content, logical transition from one sentence to the next, and an adequate amount of images to inform the article. It only shows one picture of Jackson Mac Low and this is the only image in article. The page provides a warning that sources are not fully cited properly and are only displayed as URLs, which leaves them vulnerable to link rot. The article is listed under WikiProject Chicago, WikiProject Biography, and WikiProject Vital Articles. It has a strong framework that could be further developed. The language used is clear and concise and does not attempt to persuade the reader in any way. The sections are organized in a strange way - the headers and order of information presented could be improved.
 * The lead section of this article is informative and concise. However, the rest of the article lacks developed content, logical transition from one sentence to the next, and an adequate amount of images to inform the article. It only shows one picture of Jackson Mac Low and this is the only image in article. The page provides a warning that sources are not fully cited properly and are only displayed as URLs, which leaves them vulnerable to link rot. The article is listed under WikiProject Chicago, WikiProject Biography, and WikiProject Vital Articles. It has a strong framework that could be further developed. The language used is clear and concise and does not attempt to persuade the reader in any way. The sections are organized in a strange way - the headers and order of information presented could be improved.


 * Sources
 * Malina, Judith. “Remembering Jackson Mac Low.” PAJ: A Journal of Performance and Art, vol. 27, no. 2, 2005, pp. 76–78. JSTOR, http://www.jstor.org/stable/4140042 . Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

Low, Mordecai-Mark Mac. “THE ROLE OF THE MACHINE IN THE EXPERIMENT OF EGOLESS POETRY: Jackson Mac Low and the Programmable Film Reader.” Mainframe Experimentalism: Early Computing and the Foundations of the Digital Arts, edited by Hannah B Higgins and Douglas Kahn, 1st ed., University of California Press, 2012, pp. 298–308. JSTOR, http://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctv114c7b3.27. Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

Zweig, Ellen. “Jackson Mac Low: The Limits of Formalism.” Poetics Today, vol. 3, no. 3, 1982, pp. 79–86. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.2307/1772391. Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

PERLOW, SETH. “READING BY CHANCE: JACKSON MAC LOW AND A MILLION RANDOM DIGITS.” Paideuma, vol. 42, 2015, pp. 333–67. JSTOR, http://www.jstor.org/stable/43908416. Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

Jonathan P. Eburne, and Andrew Epstein. “Introduction: Poetry Games.” Comparative Literature Studies, vol. 51, no. 1, 2014, pp. 1–17. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.5325/complitstudies.51.1.0001. Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Emmett Williams


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has no images or sections. It only has the lead section and references. There is only one proper citation listed. The language is clear and concise, but there is not enough content or information within the article to make it effective or informative. It could be improved through the introduction of proper citations, images, and the development of sub-sections that speak on different parts of Williams's life and work.


 * Sources
 * Frank, Peter. “Emmett Williams: An Appreciation.” Art on Paper, vol. 11, no. 5, 2007, pp. 16–16. JSTOR, http://www.jstor.org/stable/24556306 . Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

https://www.moma.org/artists/6377

https://www.nytimes.com/2007/03/01/obituaries/01williams.html

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Jack Smith (film director)


 * Article Evaluation
 * Sources
 * Hoberman, J. “The Theatre of Jack Smith.” The Drama Review: TDR, vol. 23, no. 1, 1979, pp. 3–12. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.2307/1145239 . Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.
 * Callie Angell. “Batman and Dracula: The Collaborations of Jack Smith and Andy Warhol.” Criticism, vol. 56, no. 2, 2014, pp. 159–86. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.13110/criticism.56.2.0159 . Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.
 * Callie Angell. “Batman and Dracula: The Collaborations of Jack Smith and Andy Warhol.” Criticism, vol. 56, no. 2, 2014, pp. 159–86. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.13110/criticism.56.2.0159 . Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.
 * Callie Angell. “Batman and Dracula: The Collaborations of Jack Smith and Andy Warhol.” Criticism, vol. 56, no. 2, 2014, pp. 159–86. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.13110/criticism.56.2.0159 . Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

Hoberman, J. “Treasures of the Mummy’s Tomb: The Lost Films of Jack Smith.” Film Comment, vol. 33, no. 6, 1997, pp. 42–47. JSTOR, http://www.jstor.org/stable/43454528. Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

John Matturri. “Jack Smith: Notes on Some Homeless Objects.” Criticism, vol. 56, no. 2, 2014, pp. 279–94. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.13110/criticism.56.2.0279. Accessed 11 Oct. 2022.

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