User:Kat3r1nayr/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Penny battery

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because in the past during physics I would always be confused during the electricity unit and I would always have to look for outside sources to help. The penny battery article is interesting as it explains how to make a penny battery as well as describes the chemistry of how it works.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article is concise and clear. It is missing some information about the electronics of a penny battery and would be improved if it went further in depth. The content of the article is on topic and mentions enough information for the reader to get an overview of the topic. I also liked the section that was added called "common misconceptions". Unfortunately one section of the article only has a link towards how to make a penny battery and does not actually describe how to make it in the article. The article is written from a mostly unbiased and neutral tone but there are sections where the author is giving advice and it should be rewritten. There is a good amount of references that are all cited. However most of the references are not academic articles. The links to the references work as they should. The article is well organized and the writing is understandable and clear. The image used is clear and properly cited. Overall the article is concise and clear but some improvements could be made.