User:KatF91/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Red tide

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am interested in water quality topics.

Evaluate the article
Overall this article is very well written, but there are some issues that stick out. The article is pretty neutral, sticking to the processes, causes, and dangers of red tide. The lead section is very well written, but is over-detailed. The lead section could better summarize the main points that can be discussed in further detail later in the article. The beginning of the "Marine Life Exposure" could use a re-work because it starts off with three short sentences that seem disorganized. This article does have a lot of uncommon terms so most seem to be linked to other pages explaining those terms, however this is lacking in the "Human Exposure" section, specifically when discussing the brevetoxins. One section that could be added to this article is how red tide waters and beaches are cleaned up.