User:Kat von B/Never Apart (Organization)/Frantopia99 Peer Review

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(Never Apart)


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 * User:Kat von B/Never Apart (Organization)


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It was very clear and concise. Maybe italicize titles, add canada after montreal that is in the intro. Organization is clear, well structured. Good use of sources, I'm not sure if you're allowed to use the actual website as a source (idk i read that somewhere in the modules), but maybe add from one of the press releases that the website provided. But it is a magazine itself or has a magazine so I imagine its valid (its hard to tell with wiki). Everything else looked great.