User:Katbel1/Half Angel/Collinbivins Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Katbel1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Katbel1/Half_Angel?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Half Angel

Evaluate the drafted changes
'''When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that'''

were confusing to you. The plot description is easy to follow and it describes the story well.

Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or

events? There are correct links everywhere except for the summary and reception.

Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself? There are only citations for the film itself.

Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct? All the grammar looks correct.

Any other comments on the entry? I think the plot summary was well written and easy to follow.