User:Kate H. Vo/Susan Oki Mollway/Amulumudi Peer Review

General info
Kate H. Vo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kate%20H.%20Vo/Susan_Oki_Mollway?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Susan Oki Mollway:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

If there is one available I think you should add a picture of your judge in the lead section so we can put a face to the name while reading through the Wikipedia page.

For early life and education, I think you should add a little more to the personal life section (again if you're able to find anything) about their Mollway's childhood to give a glimpse into why she might've wanted to go into law in the first place.

For the notable cases section, I think adding headings of the names of the cases before each paragraph about them could be beneficial

All of your sources look good!