User:Katefogarty7/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Kate Isabel Campbell - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I wanted to choose an article about a woman's contribution in the science field because they are overlooked a lot of times. I also think it is cool the advances she made in field of medicine and helping

Evaluate the article
The article had quite a bit of information, but it felt incomplete. There were many facts that were just randomly thrown in there that wasn't necessary, or it needed more information to be around it. The article could also be organized into better more clear sections, and they could add more information on her research and how she discovered everything. Her career section was kind of all over the place and could be organized in a better manner. I would also like to see better organization and added information on her upbringing and how her schooling was going from an all-female school to a university.