User:Katekim15/sandbox

Hi Kate! This is Audrey Strachan from WMST250. Based on what I've seen on Eula Biss's current Wikipedia page, here are a few suggestions I have for how you could go about editing:


 * 1) The initial section before even the biography has a few short sentences that all have different pieces of information. I don't find this style very easy to read/absorb, so you could try to combine and elongate those first few sentences (maybe providing a little more depth in addition to the breadth that is already there).
 * 2) I would say the biggest area where large edits can be done is in the "Works" section. This section does list a few of her past works, but does not explain her style, materials, symbolism, or really anything about how she creates her art. Looking at a more famous artist's "Works" section might help you better understand what I'm trying to describe, but basically I believe you could add a lot more detail to this section in order to be able to better represent her art.
 * 3) Similar to what I said about the "Works" section, I think you could add some descriptive content to the "Interviews" and "Reviews" sections that describes the content of these items. This will give the viewers a better idea of what these actually are, instead of just listing that they have previously occurred.

I think there is a lot of room for growth within Eula Biss's article, which is great for our purposes. Adding more detail and making the page more readable are two ways you could drastically improve this article. Let me know if you have any other questions - I wish you the best of luck on the rest of this assignment!