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Section 3: U.S. Census Bureau + U.S. Census Comments
I found the United States Census Bureau page fairly thorough, although I feel the proposed director for the 2020 census year is worth mentioning in the article. Though there is a link to information about the director on another page, because the U.S. Census Bureau page does mention politicizing and district maps, a brief discussion of concerns with Thomas Brunell. I think that social and political components of census taking is over-represented in the article compared to discussion of data collection methods, security, and data validation methods. The article is related to the following wikiprojects: United States / Government, United States Public Policy, Economics, and Elections and Referendums. In the talk page, there are many discussions including the definitions of race/ethnicity, whether or not the department's budget should be mentioned, and if the net financial loss from poor handheld device functioning in the 2010 census should be included. I find it interesting that the article is rated C-class/low-importance for issues like government, public policy, and elections, considering that census results have a huge impact on government funding distribution and district drawing for elections.

Natalism Review
The article only mentions 2 motivations for natalism, but there are several more worth discussing, such as social, cultural, and philosophical influences. The philosophy of natalism section is entirely lacking in sources and needs to be expanded and cited. I think there should be a discussion about how natalism/anti-natalism relates to the status of women.

Potential sources:
 * https://plato.stanford.edu/entries/parenthood/
 * https://researchcommons.waikato.ac.nz/bitstream/handle/10289/5107/jacksonprocreate.pdf?sequence=1
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=D5TbBQAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PR5&dq=natalism&ots=_GN6u5QmVA&sig=fJvUJWTHGWd2XCH6QTdBKIe2quQ#v=onepage&q=natalism&f=false
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/pdf/10.1016/0968-8080(93)90057-Z

'''So it looks like you have a really good plan on how you want to change the article but I didn't see any actual changes yet? I do like your idea about women and adding a section there and I see that you have some sources but I don't see them cited in the article maybe start there and that will help you. -Brittney Wright peer editor'''