User:KatherineModrall/Maternal Health/Mirandawesley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jmb517, KatherineModrall, Ltr35


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:KatherineModrall/Maternal Health


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maternal health

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Lead: Need to add a lead sentence or small paragraph at the top of each section before the sub-sections. Connect the added topics to maternal health in general and what it adds to the understanding of maternal health.
 * Content: The added content is extremely important & needed in the maternal health Wikipedia page. It addresses equity gaps and underrepresented populations due to the nature of racial inequities in maternal healthcare and maternal mortality, which is imperative for those reading about maternal health in general to know. The content is up to date, as the sources are recent. There is a needed citation for the health discrimination and racial bias sentence. The edits make the writing concise and informative. Also, maybe add a sentence in the decline sub-section about how even though there is a decline, there is still an urgent need for maternal health in low-income countries. Content is neutral and based on peer-reviewed data and statistics.
 * Organization: The content is very well organized and I like how it is separated into subsections with statistics and the underlying factors and contributors that touch upon the social determinants of health.