User:Katherineamerica/Brasil Sem Homophobia/18jkalmar Peer Review

General info

 * Review of Katherineamerica's plan for editing the article for Brasil Sem Homophobia

Content
Guiding questions:


 * I definitely agree with your plan to switch the quotes in the "History" section to paraphrasing, as I found that section stilted and difficult to read. Have you considered changing the title of that section as well? The information currently included does not seem to actually match the category of "History," as it is more of an outline of the program's goals/principles than a description of the founding of the program/history of homophobia in Brazil.


 * I think that adding a section about the history of homophobia in Brazil is definitely a good idea to provide context, as well as linking to other articles having to do with related topics.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * All your sources seem relevant and unbiased; godspeed finding more information that's not in Portuguese.

Overall impressions
18jkalmar (talk) 14:06, 18 October 2019 (UTC)
 * You seem to have a good idea of what changes need to be made in order to improve this article; adding context and improving the overall readability of this article will make it a lot easier for people to learn about this topic.