User:Kathleenmoran2/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Inclusion (education)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Inclusive education is very important to me and it is something I am passionate about for people with intellectual and developmental disabilities.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section was very informative, proving the reader right away with the definition of inclusion in the first sentence. It basically summarizes all the other sections that will be talked about. The lead section is short and simple and is more of a summarization of the whole article which is good!

Content and Sources and References

Tone and Balance


 * last edited on January 27th, 2022 so it is up to date
 * all resources are listed chronologically at the bottom, in date order
 * resources are also cited within the article
 * all of the evidence and writing is relevant to the topic
 * some subtopics are about schools individually like
 * at the top it says "Not to be confused with Inclusion Disability Rights" so the article points out that this is only about inclusion in education and not outside of education aka right

Organization and Writing Quality is very good, providing subtitles for other sections including the major points. The organization starts with a clear summary and image that includes an image of the subject. There are a few grammatical errors but not major enough to be confused.

Images and Media an image right away!! All images include captions or dates underneath. The images go with the subsections and make sense for where they have been places.

Talk Page Discussions


 * External Links section that includes inclusive education in other countries, inclusion and social justice articles, inclusive education libraries with direct links ot the articles on wikipedia

Overall Impressions, I would say this article is more a beginning article about inclusion education and if someone was doing research on this topic they would need a little more about the subtopics the article talks about but overall not too bad!