User:Kathouis/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
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Vitamin B12

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I took this article to evaluate because Vitamin B12 is something I see a lot and I was recommended the vitamin. My first impression was that the article was really lengthy which is beneficial for someone wanting to know more about it.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

This is a good article. I am able to understand what exactly B-12 is by reading the lead section. The information is clear, cut, precise and has many sections. The tone of the article does not feel biased in any way nor does it have any errors. Considering how this topic is in the science field, there is going to be alot of different terminology but I think think the article does a good job at providing multiple sources to help understand what it means. There are also a lot of recent edits on the Talk page and it has a score of GA. Despite the article being a good one, there is always room for improvement. I think the article could've done well without all of the sections. The article almost has too much information which makes it overwhelming to read. Plus, the complex words which makes it hard to understand. In order to understand it you must click alot of the sources listed which becomes tideous. Overall, the article is decent.~