User:Kathrynstarr

I have severe ADHD but truly love Wikipedia and am a contributor. Today I signed up as an Editor, but cannot go through all these screens JUST to make sure something is grammatically correct?

I just researched actor Paul Benedict and feel that a sentence in the section "Film & TV Work" could use a revision so that it is not misunderstood, i.e., "He was liked by all of the other characters on the show except for George Jefferson who found him annoying, but they became more friendly as the show progressed".

In its current state, it could infer that Paul was not liked by the actors, even if ".....characters...." is stated.

I'm suggesting the following: possibly something as simple as just rewriting the sentence: "He was liked by all of the other characters on the show except for George Jefferson, who found him annoying, but they became more friendly as the show progressed."

....changing it to: "On the show, all of the characters liked “Bentley”, except for “George Jefferson”, who found him annoying.  Eventually, George became more friendly with him (?) (Bentley?) as the show progressed."

Kathryn E. Starr Rockport, MA