User:Kathspeed/Kodiak Cakes/Syrupyflapjack Peer Review

Review By User:Syrupyflapjack

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Kathspeed


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Kodiak Cakes


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Kathspeed/Kodiak Cakes

Recommendations for Article

 * I would suggest that you subdivide the sections into the various types of products that Kodiak Cakes creates and each can have it's own subsection. For Instance:


 * Pancakes - This section would describe the type of pancakes that can be made with Kodiak Cakes in more detail.
 * Waffles - This section would explain the type of waffles than can be made with Kodiak Cakes in more detail.
 * Mix Types - This section would explain the various types of mix that Kodiak Cakes offers.

Evaluating the citations and missing content

 * Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * Validated Article-https://www.inc.com/video/why-kodiak-cakes-rejected-the-sharks-and-were-better-for-it.html Validated Article-https://www.themanual.com/food-and-drink/kodiak-cakes-protein-pancake-waffle-mix/
 * Is anything missing that should be added? One thing that might be helpful to add to the article is to expand on where you can purchase Kodiak cakes today. For instance I know that when I go to Target, purchasing this pancake mix is quite hard to come by, so I have to purchase multiple boxes at a time.
 * Page Store locator-https://kodiakcakes.com/pages/store-locator
 * Page Store locator-https://kodiakcakes.com/pages/store-locator

Reference
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