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Philanthropy
The Musk Foundation is a private foundation founded in 2002 by a giftedly talent technology entrepreneurs. Musk was accompanied by his brother Kimbal while beginning this foundation. The brothers are the foundation’s only officers; Elon takes the standing role as president and board director and Kimbal Musk stands for the positions of the secretary, treasurer, and board director. Musk is the provider for all contributions. Elon has gifted the organization with at least $257 million to the organization. According to its website if visited is very strict and to the point and shy’s away from much publicity, the Musk Foundation makes grants in support of four areas: “renewable energy research and advocacy;” “human space exploration research and advocacy;” “pediatric research;” and “science and engineering education.” Beneficiaries of the Musk Foundation grants include international aid nonprofits such as Doctors Without Borders; healthcare organizations such as World Spine Care; and the co-educational Mirman School for Gifted Children, the National Wildlife Federation; Sierra Club Foundation; the grant-making New Venture Fund; Global Green USA; Energy Foundation; the Clinton Foundation; People for the American Way Foundation; Oxfam America; Oceana; the Blue Green Alliance Foundation; the Tides Center; and Natural Resources Defense Council. The Musk Foundation has also contributed to at least one right-of-center nonprofit, the libertarian-aligned Cato Institute. Musk is board president of the Ad Astra School, a Los Angeles, California-based tuition-free, “by-invitation-only” private school created in 2014. He is also a “substantial contributor to the school,” paying the “fair market value of the school’s tuition” for his five children who attend Ad Astra ($28,000 per child for a total of $140,000 in 2015. Musk is also a board member of World Spine Care, a multinational chiropractic service nonprofit; and World Space Week Association, the governing nonprofit which chooses the theme of the annual World Space Week holiday in October. It’s extremely clear that the entrepreneur Musk is a dedicated and hard working man from taking on so many roles In the organization. References

WIRED. “Elon’s Empire: The Sprawling, Intertwining Web of Elon Musk’s Vested Interests.” WIRED. June 07, 2017. Accessed May 30, 2018. http://www.wired.co.uk/article/elon-musk-tesla-spacex-empire.

Musk Foundation, Return of Organization Exempt from Income Tax, 2015, Part VIII line 1;

Musk Foundation, Return of Organization Exempt from Income Tax, 2016, Schedule B Part 1 line 1; 2015, Schedule B Part 1 line 1; 2014, Schedule B Part 1 line 1; 2013, Schedule B Part 1 line 1; 2012, Schedule B Part 1 line 1

Musk Foundation. Accessed May 30, 2018. http://www.muskfoundation.org/.

“Grant Visualizer: Musk Foundation.” Foundation Search. Accessed May 30, 2018. www.foundationsearch.com.

“Grant Visualizer: Musk Foundation.” Foundation Search. Accessed May 30, 2018. www.foundationsearch.com.

Musk Foundation: Grants. Citizen Audit. Accessed May 30, 2018. https://www.citizenaudit.org/organization/770587507.

“Grant Visualizer: Musk Foundation.” Foundation Search. Accessed May 30, 2018. www.foundationsearch.com.

https://www.influencewatch.org/non-profit/musk-foundation/

https://www.influencewatch.org/person/elon-musk/

Wenqi's Feedback
It seems you paraphrased your Wiki article where you are supposed to add information to it. This is not the way to do Wiki editing. I am afraid you have to do it again.

I remember you told me you would find some data from other sources so that you could add some information or content to your Wiki article. Please stick to your original plan.

Jarrod Styer "feedback"

I think that you have a lot of good things going for this article, if I could change any of this, I would love to see you provide a few more details about the overall quality of your topic. I think you did a very good job on providing the names and using the facts from the article, so in general that adds much much more clarity to your article and makes it seem more legit. I would like to see you provide better grammar for your article but again that is very minor. Good Job!

Rafiq Walker "Feedback"

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