User:KatieLawee/Yaa Gyasi/Sophiagreco Peer Review

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You add a lot of great description of her early life and education of Yaa Gyasi and about her shyness within her family. However, you can certainly add more details to how her experience was in Ghana. What type of injustices did she see to proceed with her famous novel "Home Going". How does that build her character up to make such a great novel about the horror of colonization and slavery. I love the image in the article and the achievements and the degrees she holds. The order of describing her achievements and the novels she wrote really adds to her profile as whole. It is really easy for a reader to understand. However, one way you could improve on the article is by working on her works sections and describe the novels of Homegoing, Transcendent KingDom, and Bad Blood. How do all of these novels shape the way Yaa Gyasi is today and what more does it speak to the world with her writing. How many lives is she able to affect and make change. Does she give any speeches world-wide or locally about freedom and empowerment for women and children? Overall, your article provides a brief details about Yaa Gyasi but it could be improved more by adding the effectiveness of the author in today's society.

This link to her interview about Homegoing could help with more details as to what she wants people to experience: https://booth.butler.edu/2018/09/07/a-conversation-with-yaa-gyasi/.