User:Katielewis02/Rural health/Bibliography

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Outline of proposed changes
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My first edits to this page will be regarding the lead section. There are several instances that could use citations or more clear/concise langauge. There also seems to be a content gap in the lead section, as the worse health outcomes of rural populations is not addressed.

The two sources presented above will be used to edit the second paragraph of the lead section. Some of the information in this paragraph is redundant or not relevant for the lead section. Additionally, some sentences are wordy or could use restructuring. I will simplify this paragraph to include information on the health disparities experienced by rural areas and the factors contributing to these disparities